lol It's good, I'd accept it. The only thing I'd press is to mention what age he was at different points through his history so that the timeline is easily read (with him being 37 now, I just think I'd be interested to see exactly how far back these events took place), but that's not a serious issue by any means - it just stems from my own curiosity. Only other thing that I noticed - and it's not your fault - a time frame wasn't mentioned regarding how long it takes to be a squire. When I wrote my sheet, I did some research on historical knighthood back in the medieval era, and squires usually held their position for 7 years before knighthood. You put down 5 years. This is neither of our faults, it's just an inconsistency in the lore that should be corrected and I want to wait for Maxx to get back to us - but the detail is so minor that I wouldn't let that stop you from posting it in the character tab. After all, one of us can edit our sheets later after we get an answer. This is not in my power, but I would close any Ram Knight submissions from here on out after Royce. In any case, this is not a requirement, just something of my own personal interest: what is Royce doing, or what are his thoughts on the current invasion? We've got hordes of wights walking into Maceron at the moment (and more selfishly, what are his thoughts of the attempted coup three months back by four of the Ram Knights and one of their squires?).