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Actually...prior to August, he was experimenting on "guinea pigs" with an incomplete serum. These subjects would slowly suffer from their bodies rejecting the serum.  So this could work.
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I agree. I like where you're headed and I think it's a good start. I'd just like to see a bit more information. Tell us a bit about her life before she was experimented on. Why is she the way she is? Did she ever have a family? Friends? If it helps, take a look at some of the other CS's and see what kind of info they have. 

Again, this isn't a denial, it's just a request for more info. Like I said, I like where I think you're going with this.