[quote]. I realize it is your characters: Falk and his human servant and that's great for a character sheet but perhaps not so much for an RP header. [/quote]

Actually it isn't. Just a nice picture. And I can't find one that suits the RP Landscape-wise.

[quote] A quote is a decent tool for drawing someone in, personally I would pick something different as this one doesn't draw you immediately to thinking of fae. This song has some good options if you're looking but that's your choice as this one works well enough.[/quote]

Yes that song is where I got the idea, thank you Heather Dale. But the Quote isn't a quote. It's actually my own hand and something Aisling sings. So it's suppose to bleed into the text. The ending 'quote' is the ending part of the rhyme.

[quote]d. The narrator (evidently a minion of Falk) is aluded to as being a person present in the story but cuts off that train of though with "I'm not really important to this at all".[/quote]

It's Aisling, and she is nothing in the grand scheme of the Fae. as for the change, she did change, a lot. She's been in the Fae Court since Victorian times. So she well knows and remembers both sides of the coin. As for throwing off New Rpers. I am Trying to keep non dedicated people out. And even with that there how much attention has this Forum gotten? Quite a bit!

[quote] I realize that Falk is your character but perhaps talking about him in sections unrelated to him or the Fall Court isn't the best idea especially since this section is meant to convey information.[/quote]

Falk is a MAJOR character. It's him this world is built around and I have him in there for a reason. Falk is one of the oldest Fae and most powerful. He is a legend in his own. Also, I may type him but he is the one doing it and speaking the words. Unlike Aisling, Falk is meant to be the antagonist in this Rp.

As for the rest? Not going to worry about it too much. Though i may edit it later. I stated those Fae were only examples. I'm content to leave it as it is, I may change the picture but I don't really see any big changes I should make.