HOUSE LYSANDER ([@darkwolf687])

A note for everyone in the roleplay: we are using 'Ser' for the terminology of referencing official knights, the term 'Sir' is non-existent in this time. 

EDWIN LYSANDER 

- Allegiance should be changed to "House Rathmore", not just "Rathmore".
- His family should be labeled as who they are; who is his father, mother, brother, sister, etc.
- He can't be "avarice" because avarice is a noun, not an adjective. You can say he is "avarice incarnate" for better description.
- There's no such thing as "free men"in the lands of Estiala. Everyone is subject to the crown.
- In the backstory, who is Robert? There is no mention of Robert whatsoever. The closest name to Robert is Richard.

EMMALINE LEAR ([@HushedWhispers])

- Everything is fine, but her origin is a "some what small...". You seemed to have missed a word there. XD


REYANNA MOREWEN ([@RomanAria])

- Solace: hey look it's Rey from Star Wars
- She is not a lady, because she's not the wife of a lord. She's a princess, a daughter of a lord.
- If it's not incredibly important, Solace and I would prefer you PM us to tell us what happened to the people she was bethrothed to, unless it's SUPER DUPER secret.