[@Delta44] Your sig is hypnotising, If I hadnt already married selena I would be all over camillia at this point :) ......but back to your CS I love the detail, but there are a few things that should be adressed. 1. If shes searching for soul edge to destroy it then she is actually searching for the soul calibur as that is the reason to have that weapon. 2. Too many weapons, I understand she is versatile adventurer but as a soul calibur RP you should really only have a main weapon or dual set of main weapons (two daggers, Sword and dagger, etc.) The use of pisotls will have to be heavily nerfed (slow to fire, and to reload, shaky accuracy) and it would take up one of your weapon slots (one for each hand). This also goes for [@Double] and your 4 pistols, I'm afraid you can only have one weapon for each hand. (apart from this you are approved) 3. This is more of an aesthetic thing, but would an aztec (which is ancient mexico) really have a fair skinned redhead anime girl? Not that its a huge issue, especially when it comes to anime, but I was wondering if there was a specific reason for this or if it was a stylistic choice?