I guess since we don't really have a GM we should just kind of have a tribal council for [@Sophrus]. Your character looks mostly fine to me, but I have found from past experience that having a character with mind control can be really tricky. I think it's fine as long as it isn't super abused against player character's but I'll just throw that out there.

Anyways, I'll get my post up tomorrow. I just got back from Disneyland which was super fun but I'm also super tired and feel bloated from turkey legs and ice cream.