Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Sohtem
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@Dark Wind No I don't mind, I had put my character there just because of all her ties there and the such and figured when the action started it would draw her there, but if you want to get everyone interacting with each other, than it's fine by me if you control her.
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Just a status, update. Decided to put more into my CS than anticipated, hence while I did not finish, it is about half done. Should be up at some point within the next 24 hours. Apologies for the delay.
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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Tsar Gatto
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Tsar Gatto African or European?

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Greetings all!

I have been lurking and if possible would be very happy to join you. Finished my ‘main’ character, hopefully this falls in line with what you were looking for. Any feedback I more than welcome, let me know if anything needs changing or any suggestions you may have.

I do intend, depending on how all goes, to also make a very non-Jedi character too.

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Would the enclave have Jacuzzi's hot springs and some sauna's. For meditation purposes of course.
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will get my character up at the weekend.
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Jacuzzi's, probably not. Saunas I might see, and a hot spring potentially. But, they'd probably have them divided: or set hours in which only men may go or only women.
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@Tsar Gatto I'd suggest toning down how powerful some of her force powers are. Not by much, but just a tad. I do love the character and am close to accepting. Very close.
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@Dark Windbetter than nothing.
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Tsar Gatto African or European?

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@Dark Wind

No problem, I will do so tomorrow. Reading through her abilities do come off stronger than intended. I should clarify that her abilities are good for a new knight, not compared to a master or even more experienced knight.

The existing posts are great, looking forwards to more.
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@Dark Wind -- I sent you a PM (I think, though the system on this site seems different than I'm used to) for you to peruse and answer at your leisure. Just a couple of questions I had.
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@Lucky Knight

Responded!

@Tsar Gatto

Excellent, I'm looking forward to having you on board. JEDI REPRESENT. What's our gang sign? Anyone know? Lol.
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What the hell happened I made a post and it vanished.
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Glitch? I know I didn't see one.
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I'm going to try my best to re-write it but I really felt like I nailed it the first time so I'm not sure I can do it just as well again.
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Send it to me in a PM just in case this one goes haywire too!
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That post was a lot worse than the original. Ken comes off as more insecure in this post than he did in the last one.
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On a side note I fixed up the post somewhat. There were a few repeats here and there so I did what I could.
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Still a solid post and has good characterization. Not bad, I say, not bad at all!
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vancexentan Hawk of Endymion

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I did what I could no use crying over spilled milk even if that milk was tastier.
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@Lucky Knight

Also, forgot to mention: great song choice. LOVE The Bravery.
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