Just wrote that last post in crazy good time (for me). I do love a good bar fight! [@Luminosity] I really enjoyed your last post, by the way. I felt something akin to playing [i]The Last of Us[/i] in reading the outdoor portion of the fight. It was an absolute pleasure to read. I also noticed the lack of remorse on part of Fiona and, if this is an element you want to play with going forward, I would be happy to have Faruq play a role. Clearly he feels awfully affectionate toward Fiona and you can believe he is feeling deeply disappointed in her actions -- perhaps this reflects upon his own fear of veering from the noble path too.