*sigh* We really are trying with the collab. We'll work on it some more tomorrow -- it should be done by the end of the day. (We're at literally 6,000+ [i]words[/i] right now and our people are still rambling at each other. This is why it's probably a bad idea to let Aria and Wolfie go at it without someone to keep them in check.) Edit: PHRASING! >-<