[@Ariamis]
I find your CS completely excellent. I can see him becoming quite the formidable character later.

As long as you don't go crazy with that mind dominate thing, you're good to go~

[@CrystalApple]
The magic is any sort of magic your character is well versed in. For example, Ophene's abilities with fire or healing. She could develop further skill with her fire abilities as well her healing magic. Any fire abilities would fall under that initial fire magic.

[i]however[/i] do keep in mind that at this moment in time it would be rather unrealistic for your characters to master more than one or two sort of...shall we say 'elemental' abilities. I think Ariamis' character Nazrc'thath, is a good example to go by. A single 'element' - the Telekinesis - to start with, with two supporting magics that work well together.

EDIT:
I'm also going to say, try not to have abilities that are so similar to another character. If you do, at least try to make it different enough, please. If I get another character similar to any of the already accepted ones, I will likely ask you to come up with some different abilities.