Yours was just fine! Now what do [i]you[/i] think about [i]my[/i] wall of words? xD

In all seriousness, a couple things to note: 
I like roleplays ‘broad’ in a sense that my writings are not strictly limited to the actions of the main character(s) with each other, but many descriptions, side characters, etc. It may just be my deal, but I truly think this expanded scope makes the RP better and more alive. But then again, some would say it's simple fluff, and I totally understand if you view it as such too.
Also, I prefer the...subtler ways of persuasion to simple torture. I don't know, the brutality just doesn't appeal to me much and I can't write it as good, haha. Of course that doesn't mean we can't have any of it—for now I made Luciano rely on solely words (as for her replies, feel free to fill them in between his words!), but if Elena stays unyielding, then eventually he'll be forced to take out the more drastic methods. Up to you!