[quote=@Ojo chan 42]
thanks for fixing the spelling, I still have trouble with english (why does my main language have to be so different T,T) And please do give me you opinion. like I said this char is still open for modifications, that's why I posted it way before I am planning to use him. I want to make sure I make a char good enough for this RP, for I am enjoying this RP way to much. 
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I'd be happy to give you some feedback but LadyRunic became rather angry the last time I addressed questions asked of her. Seemed to think it was disrespectful. Once she comments on it I'll bring up anything that she may have missed or not scrutinized closely. Until then it's her stage.