[quote=@Prince of Seraphs] Yes but since Elenore was the one with a relationship with a Kelpie and this was several years after Caoimhin's capture and death so that wouldn't give him any special Kelpie knowledge. Clyde may have run from the iron as it can kill him but there is no reason that his sister despite the pain of iron couldn't still drown the man. Iron in any form doesn't have the power to enslave a fae. It merely hurts or kills them. I respect that you're deriving this from old legends and lore but that's not the way it works in LadyRunic's fae universe. If it was the blacksmith's foolish idea that iron crosses would work then they shouldn't have, Caoimhin would have killed him and either died herself of iron exposure or had her brother remove the bridle before it killed her. Also I think you mean bridle, my sister rides horses and I know of no piece of equipment other than the sheath she keeps her weapon in that could be called a holster. Plus if it was placed on Caoimhin's head as seems to be the case it would be the bridle. Wait, so the Kelpie Laira's mother mated with was Clyde's father? Doesn't that make them half siblings, in which case gross. [/quote] No no no they are not related at all. I think you misunderstood me, they are not related at all. I thought you ment the father of Clyde. But to awnser your question, indeed Clyde and Laira's father do not know eachother. And bridle, thanks. I think i misread something (and cool, my sister also works with horses but blwe call a bridle a hoofdtuig or hoofdstel) But [@LadyRunic] what do you propose I change about the past. I kind of worked really hard to write this story with all the folklore in the right place.