[@Javier] The entire character seems to be fine except for the history (though, honestly, I don't really care about that. If you want to play a guy whose gonna get questioned at every point in his life simply for being weird, be my guest, but it won't make his life in the Jiyutai easier) and the kekkei genkai -- which needs a rework. There's too many bonuses and there's exactly 0 weaknesses.