[quote=@Muttonhawk]
Yeah, we don't have monopoly. It's just that there's a difference between some mortal being inspired to heat up the pretty rocks and a egypt-esque expansionist empire being made out of disparate stone age tribes at a snap of the fingers.

If you're stuck for what to write, get into the details of what you're trying to build. Show us the interesting challenges that were overcome to make this new society. It will do wonders in setting the tone for the society and building its character.

Sorry that there isn't much foundation for epic clashes right now, but you're simply going to have to build them yourself over time, so everyone understands what is actually being built.

Right now there's simply Amartia corrupting people, and a whole bunch of dialogue-starved, faceless characters behind him. I can't tell whether this new city is a dangerous place, or a utopian place, or barely holding together through fear, or what. There are plenty of gaps to fill.
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[quote=@WrongEndoftheRainbow]
[@Muttonhawk] as I already alerted you to what our next plan for Xerxes is, just PM me your issues in exact and I'll try to address them and flesh everything out more as I change Xerxes up in the time I get to do so. Goes for everyone else too, just voice what you want detailed and I'll get to work once I get some collab posts pushed out. Also Loki get back to me on if you're fine with me changing up the city while Amartia is occupied.

EDIT: Heavy WIP

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Your gonna have to give me a few days, Im going to be very busy. Thanks [@WrongEndoftheRainbow] but what is the plan again? Can't be making plans behind my back about my city, unless its the Breaking Bad thing we were talking about. As for a government, thats been done, look at the nation sheet. That will be rped out when I can calm down and write a fully fleshed out post. I guess I've just been to invested in growing it and not 'designing' it. I apologize.

Due to your post [@Muttonhawk], I'm starting to look at nation building diffrently. If y'all are willing to give [b]me[/b] another chance to actually politically and socially build my nation, it would much appreciated.

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