[@dragonmancer] The race sheet is good, lots of detail. The character sheet is mostly good, one concern I have for your character is the lack of weapons or real armor. He shuns everything? Wouldn't even use a very basic shotgun or rifle? Many of the enemies the characters will face are going to use some very powerful weaponry.

One change you could make is to the last part of his backstory, none of the characters know about the team being formed, a word of it hasn't been spoken to them. The first mention will be at the start of the IC when they're all gathered together to form the team. Other than that it's good to go.

[@POOHEAD189] It's also good, forgot to fill in the Bionic Limbs/Synthetic Organs/Robotic Augmentations section. Put N/A if he doesn't have any. He has conflict with the Stars which should be interesting considering some of the other characters in the cast who were a part of them.