[@Kiddo]

This sounds more look an ingame rework rather than a different interpretation for the sake of the RP. There's no need to detail things like "Unless she has attacked a minion or monster in the past 3 seconds, Evelynn is completely invisible to minions." or "Evelynn attacks a target twice, applying onhit effects" this because those aren't applicable real life. Try changing things to read as they would a description of things happening in real life. For example in regards to Eve

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Shadow Walk(or somethin) Passive: Evelyn can avoid being noticed unless within 10 feet of someone or actively attempting to be noticed. Once noticed she remains noticeable until she leaves that persons line of sight.

Hate Spike Q: Evelyn can use prana to form spikes that rip through the ground at high speeds.

Dark Frenzy W: Evenlyn can use her prana to move herself move faster and break free from restraints

Ravage E: Evenlyn can infuse herself with prana to allow herself to attack in rapid sucession

(idk the name XD) R: Evenlyn can cause a massive area to erupt into spikes, impaling everything in the area, thought nonlethally. In addition Evelyn absorbs pain from anything in the area, manifesting as a shield around herself. [/hider]