[@LordZell]To be perfectly honest, you could actually probably just claim right up to the coast unless someone else comes along and snatches instead. Just have your cities or whatever be separated by a shit ton of desert.

As for your NS, I'm sure you can think of something. You could put down the TK's motives/goals, how they raise armies and such and how they are different then the typical undead used by Vampire Counts. I remember someone was saying they wanted to do a Nippon/VC cross or something.

Also, next time just put the claim in a picture instead of a link, small things.