[@EkkoRhodes]

Looking better. Consider yourself accepted! And if you have any questions or need any advice about how things work around here, don't hesitate to ask!

[@Renny]

I like the character a lot, actually. An inexperienced kid with powers he doesn't fully understand- makes me think of Star-Brand. As MrD said, though, I'd like to see either some weaknesses to balance out his raw power or dial it back a bit. On a side note, he's probably wanted in Japan for negligent homicide, so don't be surprised if people come gunning for him to take him to Japan to stand trial. 

[@Sterling]

Your character looks good to me, so consider yourself accepted! I'm equally puzzled by the fae/ demon debate but I guess that's just semantics, I guess it's possible she doesn't really even know herself. I've seen "fae" used as a catch-all term for supernatural beings, though folklorists would probably wince at that.