Hey yall. One of my friends wrote a little somethin and would like some feedback on it. He put it in the gallery but idk how often peope actually look there and you people seem like you know a thing or two about writing. It'd be pretty cool if you could look at [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/138710-feedback-wanted-noir-esque-superhero-story-short/ooc#post-3812245]it[/url] and tell him what you think. Its a wee snippet of a superpower universe, a bit similair to Worm if any you have read that. Don't feel obligated but it'd be nice. ^.^

[sub][sub]"hehe, guilt trip."[/sub][/sub]