[quote=@Vicier] Hey honey..! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you on your CS o: I love her; she's looking really good, there are only a couple of things I need you to tweak however, before I can accept you. The first thing that needs to be changed is her father. Stephan was [i]never[/i] King of the Moors... he was King of England. Maleficent has always ruled over the Moors since she took up residency there; so if Stephan is still alive, he has no claim what so ever over those lands. The second thing I need you to have a look at is her crystal gazing; unfortunately I'm going to have to put a limit on this- she will only be able to gaze throughout the realm of Rivenspire (meaning Rivenspire, Wonderland, Narnia and Halloween Town); not be able to gaze at other realms such as Earth, meaning sh won't be able to see Elphaba, the other guardians, or any of the children. Also... you keep calling the world Rivendale. x'D [/quote] Thank you so much! I was a little confused on what King Stefan was actually king of, seeing as it was never really specified. There was actually some article saying the kingdom alongside the Moors was Scotland, but I wasn't quite sure where to take it. I'm glad you've cleared that up xD I totally understand the whole crystal ball thing, and, to be honest, I didn't even think about her being able to see other realms. Even to me, I agree it would be a little [i]too[/i] overpowered. I'm also a little confuzzled when it comes to the world names. Is the world not called Rivenspire? Or is that the realm? :confused I feel like such a noob over here, I did read everything, I promise! ^^