[@PlatinumSkink]I took an extra day to try and correct mistakes. I have failed to make sure it was error free. When I get it to CS, I will make sure to change Team Valor to Virtue, and am willing to correct the town name to Goldshore. I was already on a roll when I got done with Martin, so I just kept going with Nincada. I get Pokemon don't have much to them, but I was into showing some odd quirks for him. In terms of the background, you took the time to write all the cities out, so I got curious and read them. Glad I got accepted, even being as late as I was.