[quote]The finger of shame was quickly thrust in Vin's face as Nate narrowed his eyes and practically yelled "And you! You wouldn't be out here looking to solicit this fine young floozy's cervixes would you?."[/quote]

I don't know if this was a typo or not but it is the greatest. 

Rawk. Rawk. Bro. You score massive points for that Sanford and Son reference. 

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Ooooh... Now I don't know how I want to introduce... On the one hand, the mine is described as barely held up, so my plan of having her accidentally cave in part of it seems less viable... On the other hand, having her just walk out from the mine proper seems anti-climactic... But on the other, this isn't a scene I'd like to just bust in on... Grrr...