[@Zero Hex] I'll allow a Mongolian inspired character, but keep in mind, this is not literal history. I would say that the Mongolians would be from a very distant land, and this would be more of a scouting mission to see if their ambitions of invasion are feasible. You know how when the Mongols invaded Japan, they were annihilated by a typhoon... twice. That's kinda what would happen if they sent their hoards after Anjou right now. Naturally, the scouting mission would turn into a quest to overthrow the fox once they realize just how solid his power is. [@RyuShura] Looks good. Just a couple of things. I'll need you to clarify, "her body does not react to the physical world normally like a mortal." Is that simply the things you listed thereafter? If so, that's OK. If it's some kind of intangibility, I'll need you to specify what it is, and it will have to be [i]very[/i] limited. Also, I want you to elaborate a bit on the backstory. Why was Juri out of all the spirits chosen to take down Anjou? The elders would have to know she would fail on her own. Just give me a paragraph explaining this decision. [@Tojin]Sounds good! Now, I'll be typing up a bit more on the world. Hopefully it'll seem like a proper introduction after this.