[@Sodium] I feel like your character is a bit overpowered. She has all kinds of thieving rogue skills, but also has super-strength and can use heave weapons. I would say have your abilities focus on either the strength aspect or the stealth aspect. Likewise, the bag of holding is a bit much, so I'll say she'll have to carry her tools on her person. Also, try to find a more eastern looking dragon for the image. 

[@Banana] Looks mostly good. I just need you to specify some limits on a couple of your abilities. I need you to put a concrete limitation on the Deathgrip more specific than "as long as he can." How long [i]can[/i] he? How strong is he? Also, I want you to specify exactly what the healing sap can heal. I'll say no to a magical cure-all, as I like injuries to be meaningful. I would suggest picking a specific kind of injury it can heal, and even then require a great deal of exertion.

Everyone else, I'll give these two a day or so to get their characters in order, and then I'll move us along.