[@Aristo] Speaking strictly for the Military section, a red and green pros-cons list would be appreciated. Also, some units seem to have a mix of weapons, mind if you split them up according to weapon like how the other sheets have them? IE: instead of Foreign-Style Infantry carrying both pikes and guns, could you do it like "Foreign-Style Infantry (Handguns)" and "Foreign-Style Infantry (Pikes)"?

A small thing that doesn't really matter that if you could put down the Lore of the Dispelling Aura spell as "Lore of Anti-Magic" or something? Not required, but just a small touch ^^

After that you should be fine to move over to the Char section. I would say to add some culture bits but the rest of your NS does a decent enough job of displaying the military culture.

Have fun in the IC and go out there to make a Legacy son!