[quote=@KoL]
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Thank you. I guess I'm just too auto critical sometimes. But just as the saying goes, "Better safe than sorry".
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I thought my post was pretty awful too; I think we all (roleplayers, I mean) tend to criticise or analyse our own posts a lot, so I wouldn't worry about it too much. I thought your post was fine too.