[@NecroKnight] - I dig it.  I'm not familiar with Eldar lore or how Bonesingers work.  My experiences with them tend to be from the other side of a plasma rifle. :D  I feel like I may be putting my foot in my mouth for this one but the stylized writing approach you took for her accents is flavorful, but it makes this more difficult to read.  The tempo is off...at least for me.  Forgive me if that offends.  I think because this was all in "first person" with no break to describe action, the stylistic choice doesn't have any context for it to be stylistic.  

Other than that, I like her.  I could see her and Nakera getting into it over "Machine Spirits".