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Fifty-seven thousand.
One hundred.
And sixty-nine.
Characters.

I hope I haven't overhyped this. It was a slog to write and edit.

If you'll excuse me, I have to catch up with the rest of my life.
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@Muttonhawk You rest easy there, pal. You've done a Good. The hype is satisfied.

Give your student ass a well-earned break.
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@LokiLeo789 I don't get how just simply saying "Pride" makes Amartia instantly turn 300 of Vowzra's most loyal soldiers betray him and follow a random demigod. I would think that @Kho would say something about this...
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@LokiLeo789 I don't get how just simply saying "Pride" makes Amartia instantly turn 300 of Vowzra's most loyal soldiers betray him and follow a random demigod. I would think that @Kho would say something about this...


I was having the same thoughts. I think it would be less intrusive if he just got some random peasants from Galbar or something.
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Also, is it bad that I'm writing the Realta like divine terminators?

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I did give Loki the permission to take 300 victors and Kho hasn't objected to it either, from what I saw.

I do think the whole bit was a bit too skimmed over, as Vec said, the simple fact they are prideful feels far from enough to convert them. But that is more of a narrative issue, he will still get his army.
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@Double Capybara Oh yes, I don't have a problem with him getting his army :/ It's the narrative issue that's bugging me, as you said.
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@poog the pig Nope. You're doing it perfectly. The Realta should seem inhuman, alien, and terrifying, and thus far everyone has done a really great job of writing them. I'm curious to see what you come up with.

...by the end of this, I genuinely hope that the Galbarians look up at the Night sky with fear.
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...by the end of this, I genuinely hope that the Galbarians look up at the Night sky with fear.


They'll have something to protect them, then, although I'll drop you a quote from an upcoming post involving the Realta fighting Alefprian guardsmen.

"The Realta then landed as suddenly as they fired, advancing in a line and fearlessly leaping into the face of the Alefprian resistance. They spun in regimented whirlwinds of death, cutting into flesh, and breaking soldiers under their relentless march towards Alefpria. Gestun spun his head left and right, unable to make sense of the spectacle before him."

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Now we show the scope of Alefpria, it's armies, and then how useless normal soldiers are against Realta. Also a little Oevadia narrative.
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Gestun was shocked - seeing the Emperor he had thought of as a living god loom over something as small as one person out of the thousands he had under his charge.

...well, he is a living god... Half... Bah. You get my point 8D

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@Vec Yeah, Loki just wanted a few Victors, it was kind of a deal we worked out while Vowzra was roflstomping Xerxes. I haven't read the post in question yet, so I can't really say anything. If it's not quite up there story-wise we can fix it retrospectively without contradicting whatever it is Loki has written. In fact, a potential post is already forming in my mind...

Also, been waiting on somebody to do it, but it seems like no one feels like indulging me. So I'll do it myself.

Kho: *Looks at OOC post number in passing*
Kho: *Freezes*
Kho: *Looks again*
Kho: It...it...

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Posted a thing I've had finished for a week or so now, but was itself waiting for a finished collab to be posted separately. That collab is now included as one of its sections instead. Also, parts of this and the previous post used to be one and the same, so there's some chronology errors and only the latest Might tally is accurate.

Currently tapping out a weird rant about what arksynth is that may or may not be useful.

RIP Vakarlon.
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Blood Bits and Cogs for the Blood God Deus Mechanicus!
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actually don't wait for the expository rant on the organic technology thing

i'll greentext this shit tomorrow or something what the hell

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make things out of meat but they do not ever work as they Should
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Just retro-edited aspects of Loki's post so it makes more sense (the whole thing with the spider is impossible on Chronos after all - assume that he did not realise he'd been knocked out and the rest of that part was a dream sequence.)
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>When you re-read your long post and realize how shit it is.

I'm already low on time but there is no way I'm posting this. Rewriting shouldn't be hard.

Man... Thanks god the Parade bits are finally over with this one, then it will mostly be about developing characters instead of introducing concepts.
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@everyone

You guys are putting the I in Quality with all these wonderful, unique posts! I dare say this has been the best RP I've ever joined throughout my RPing career C:
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actually don't wait for the expository rant on the organic technology thing

i'll greentext this shit tomorrow or something what the hell

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make things out of meat but they do not ever work as they Should


plz do

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