[quote=@Hellis]
Personality expanded on quite a bit. Valen don't have [i]much[/i] outside his work as it were. Its what happens when someone is raised to be one way. What he does have revolves around his vices (drinking, picking fights). 
[/quote]

Looks good to me. You may want to proofread the sheet and stamp out grammar, spelling and formatting issues. Other than that, you have the all clear from me.

Let's see what [@Dervish] and [@Leidenschaft] think.