[@Banana] Ok, I have had the time to look through the entire profile for a complete and thorough read through. You may not like what I have to say. All in all, this is a complete and total rewrite. I'll leave out the little nitpicks and focus only on the big issues here. History: This is full of inconsistencies, flaws, and reads like you're trying to make something as dark and edgy as possible to the detriment of flow and believable character development. I will go ahead and assume that you haven't read the original story while I explain some things, so I apologize if you have and anything I say is something you already know. In terms of his parents being murdered and being abducted by the government, that's a tremendous no. There [i]is[/i] an organization that could have abducted him to perform experiments (that being Cauldron) but no murder would be necessary and I can guarantee that he wouldn't remember much (if anything) of his escape. The government does nothing of the sort to anybody, one reason being if they did and the parahuman escaped it would completely destroy all faith the people have and cause a revolution. Another point is that you cannot scan someone's DNA to see if they have the potential to trigger. Anyone who is the child of a parahuman is known to be almost guaranteed to also have the ability to trigger, and certain individuals know about a portion of the brain they can look at, but in no way is it something you can scan for, at least not without invasive brain surgery. You are also not destined to be a certain classification of parahuman. There is a force that determines the generality of your powers, but the trigger itself defines the specifics of how it functions and manifests. So not only can you not predict who is has the potential to be a parahuman, you sure as Hell can't predict what sort of power they'll manifest. Personality: So this kid, from the ages of 6-10, goes through what can only be described as a literal Hell, and he comes out of it with only some deadened emotions? I'm flabbergast he isn't dead from the shock of the trauma, or at the very least mentally crippled beyond help. Parahumanism: So the very first thing I'll say is this: Nobody is supposed to be one of the biggest and baddest in the world, or even the country, with regards to their powers. So him being one of the highest rated thinkers is instantly a no go right off the bat. That being said, I would like more pure thinkers and this power can be reworked, but it'd need to be done so heavily. The floating thing bugs me a lot. Why levitation? What does that have to do with being a thinker? That's Mover or Breaker status (depending on the specifics of how it works). Thinker is not a catch all term for psychic powers, it's for powers that somehow augment your mental processes, so the levitation is completely unrelated. Then there's the sheer scope and power of this ability. He seems to be a precog, an empath, and have instant deductive understanding. Each of these are fine on their own (to a lesser extent that last one) but you're combining as many mind-based powers as you can hear, which isn't the point. The point is to make a creative power that works in a very specific way and seeing what you can do with it. Then there's the Trump portion. [quote]Through getting hit by one power, he takes in the knowledge of how it works, and is then able to use it to his advantage for a period of time ranging from 5 seconds to upwards of 20 minutes, depending on how hard he is hit by a power.[/quote] How does he affect someone's power after he's been hit by it? Does he just think and he alters their power in some way? Increase its potency? Decrease it? Change their range or how it works? Does he just learn all about how it works then he can take physical action against it now that he's educated? If it's the former, you need to describe [i]exactly[/i] what he does and how potent an effect it has. If it's the latter, that's not Trump at all, that's just applying information you learned (which is definitely Thinker, and certainly not a bad application of Thinker either, so kudos there). Then there's the limitations, which seem to fly in the face of being "immune to any outside mental/emotional force." (I would definitely be declining that immunity, by the way, as a major major no no). You say that he's particularly weak to mental/emotional pressure in an area, including from others outside of himself, and his mind is easily clouded just by seeing someone dead. Fair enough, I can abide that sort of limitation, I'm just not sure you notice that you contradicted yourself there. Additionally though, you mention information overload requiring a nap. Ok, fair enough, but how does it affect him at the time? Does this distract him? Cause headaches or migraines? Details details details, they are always important. So like I said before, it's a complete rewrite. I apologize if that's something of a bummer, but it is necessary. If you have any questions I'm always available to address them, and you can check the approved CSs for ideas and inspirations. I would definitely recommend doing that. I can't dictate to you how to redo the history, but I would like to give a few ideas on how you can rework his power set. [list][*]He's a precog that can sense immediate danger (like Spiderman's spider sense), it only works on threats against him that are in the now and does not warn him against conspiracies to endanger him later. [*]The opposite, he can sense long-term threats but not immediate in your face danger. [*]Superhuman perception, he notices intricate details and can deduce information from them Sherlock Holmes style. This can also grant an insight into how others' powers work. [*]He's a precog that can sense nearly any situation, be it a dangerous threat, the weather in Japan, the potential for a business venture to be profitable, or otherwise, but can only communicate his predictions to others in a strange code. "what's the status of our operations in Malay?" "Orange-Triangle-Pennywhistle-Nihilst"[/list] Those are just some real general ideas off the top of my head, I'm sure it could be expanded to plenty more.