[quote=Nicias Askani]
:::::::::::::Natsume personality is best described by this statement “if she tells you to bite her, she cares enough to insult you” if that went over anybodies head I’ll translate. She usually has a cold exterior, and when she “warms up” to people they see that she is rather blunt and forthcoming. But the fact that she speaks to anyone kind of means she cares for them. She doesn’t feel like she is anything particularly special or the worlds greatest genin, but she hold herself with confidence and a level shinobi head. Which means shes usually thinking about one of three things. The matter at hand, how to get out of the matter at hand in case of emergency, and how to kill everyone present (allys not always excluded) she also thinks of her self as a monster because of the way people treated her and the books she read about her heritage. :Natume grew up normal I guess you could say. Well that’s not entirely true, her mother was a shinobi her father a merchant which makes for an interesting story over drinks. But while her mother was a decent ninja her father was a carrier of the Yuki Clan gene. So from a young age Natsume had a clear affinity for Ice. But because it was so rare and because people weren’t exactly fond of Clan kekkei genkai she caught a lot of grief because of it. being bullied, ostracized and picked on is what developed her cold shell and preference to literature over people. Being a bookworm comes with perks though, such as the mental aptitude for genjutsu and mind games. Her father probably shouldn’t have given her a book on psychological warfare when she turned nine but oh well. To late now. So in the academy after learning the transformation technique she got a lot of her bullies back. She was eventually caught and was completely unapologetic. Especially since she knew better that to admit to anything that wasn’t mentioned, so she really got away with half of the stuff. She dabbled secretly with Ice but so far nothing has really come from it. her father, being a merchant got things from all over the contry and found a book about the clan but it was written by people who didn’t like the clan so it was a extreme blow to herself esteem in everything aside from her abilities. She internalized the information and the degradation, becoming a colder shell than before. payback became pointless if regardless society would view her as a monster, so she became the monster. For now. :[u][/u]:Chakra Control: Being fond of genjutsu she has a impressive degree of chakra control. This also comes from her constant practice from her playing with her Ice release Kekkai genkai. Accuracy: Her skill with thrown weapons, such as shuriken, kunai and Senbon are well refined but there is still room for improvementChakra Aura: When particularly peeved she emits a dark charkra that can be kind of intimidating Cold tolerance: Coldness doesn’t bother her at all, she doesn’t get cold. She can feel the cold, but it doesn’t affect her like it does other people. ::
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A few things, other that its a good CS. :)
Always good to start with that. But on to what I have to comment on :

1.) For starting genin, a good charka control is for now the highest chakra control. It has to be trained and grown in the IC to become higher. A impressive degree of chakra control is thus not really acceptable.

2.) As for Silent Killing, even at Genin level, I would count that as a C ranked Jutsu (Fighting style. Bit of the same deal atm ;) ). If you would swap on C ranked jutsu out that would be fine with me.

Let me please know when you're done so that I can review it again. ^^