[@The Wild West]
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That's a fairly well done character sheet in my opinion. The only problem I foresee is that a bit ago our wonderful GM posted something that'll affect your backstory slightly

[quote=@ProPro]
Anybody who is working on a main team character (which means basically just the local villain gang right now), I'd really like you to finish up before I get that post. If you do not, then you will be recruited to the gang in-game. Capiche? Capiche.
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So you may have to give that a little change as you'll need to be recruited in game as per that post, but other than that it looks nice. ^.^
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