[@Shadow Daedalus] Looks good but...
1. Too many Enchanted weapons. Remember , people hate magic. He may not hate it but his superiors do. Choose two and discard the others , please and...all those weapons would make him an Holy Templar. He wouldn't be sent on this mission if he would be one. 
2. Ranks : 
[list][*] T1 ( Tier 1 ) : Initiate ( Lowest rank , basically they are Jailers )
[*] T2 : Apprentice Templar ( Low rank. Patrol Duty , nothing more )
[*] T3 : Templar ( Normal Rank , Mage Guardians and Executioners and occasionally sent in missions for The Empire )  
[*] T4 : Grand Templar ( Maximum level allowed for player characters , any higher and they wouldn't be allowed to join the mission , they would be too valuable ) ( Elite Soldiers. Sent on special missions and squad commanders )
[*] T5 : Lord Templar ( Controls all non-secret missions assignments. Seen on the battlefield only when the battle is almost lost ) 
[*] T6 : Holy Templar ( The strongest soldiers of The Empire. A squad of these soldiers can easily fight against 30 soldiers and win without a scratch , only sent on secret missions or when everything else has failed )  
[*] T7 : Ascended Templar ( The highest tier , he is practically the General of the Empire's Anti-Magi army ) 
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I hope that helps you ^_^