[quote=@Antarctic Termite] In detail? Nope. Something similar happens in the original copy of HW's summoning post; I decided to pull that, because at that point it was just shock gore for shock gore's sake. It's distressing content, no matter how well written, and shouldn't be taken lightly. It's up to you how you handle the alternatives. One option could be to start the post's narrative shortly after the event and leave allusions to what happened, or have a section break with implications in the first half and consequences in the latter. Even left to the imagination it'll still be a horrific tragedy. [/quote] Hmm, think I might write it the first way, I'm not the best at writing such things in the first place. Maybe I'll focus on one childs POV and, as you said, leave the rest to the imagination. No need people throwing up all over the IC.