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Hey guys, this most recent IC post is kinda of new to me. I'm trying to switch up the way I write abit. Instead of having Amartía be he focuse all the time, I'm trying to use others to convey feelings and sights that Amartía can't. 

I think it worked well. I left alot to the imagination, but if anyone is confused to what happened; Amartía basically found Occult Magic to be extremely interesting and desides to experiment by attacking the Village and rounding up its occupants. Then he has a Priest preform a ritual and kill each an every one of them. Amartía creates stone golems in which he binds thier souls to. Basically turning them into stone marionettes. 

Would like some feedback, anythung that would help me grow.
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It's okay. I don't really like the style, it reminds me of Young Adult Novels.

And I hate young adult novels. 

On another note, what was the point of the child sacrifice within the post? Was it supposed to parallel the main character? Because to be frank, I find the concept extremely edgy in practice.