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I would never!

I'm merely a trope supremacist! I simply go for the best tropes, and as many of them as I can cram into one post. *mumbles about how you're implying my edgy tropes are too much*

In an actual seriousness that I lacked before, I'd challenge your logic. From what I gather you just think the child sacrifice had no narrative value and was only in there for 'edginess', but one could say the same for Lifprasil being androgynous, Belvast being a cat, and Bjorn existing in the first place.

Sometimes you just gotta be whimsical to bring something random and different, y'know? Unless it's constant and recurring I don't find myself annoyed with edginess.
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Lifprasil being androgynous is supposed to be representative of his stance on neutrality.

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You sure about that whimsical statement?

EDIT: I'm honestly not really bothered by it anymore, but Loki wanted critique, and a key point in writing an effective story is making sure you don't write in things that don't have any place in the story. [@Vec] [@Cyclone]