[quote=@nitemare shape] This is a well done CS, my only concern is how it fits with the setting of this particular RPG. It seems like it would be a better fit for a fantasy genre rather than a superhero/comic book setting. That said, I'd like to see more of an explanation as to how he fits in with the modern setting and what he is doing now. [/quote] Will do, I'll have to brainstorm with that and flesh out the bio more, especially post-rebirth part of his story. I'll get back to you on that if I figure out anything.