I'll likely start with my relations sheet sometime tomorrow evening. I'm kind of dead at the moment ^^

So how's all the peeps?

@BlackPanther

Doing good, doing good. What're you up to?

@Write
Nothing much
Waiting for my photography class to start

And thinking on the rest of my game plan for studying for biochemistry

@BlackPanther Having finals sickness. While you folks are starting uni, I'm reaching its end. Wonderful.

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@mae Can you explain to me something pleeeeaasse ? How do I do that Relationship Table thing ? I totally didn't understood what to do...unfortunately :(

@Angel Eyes Right so, in formative history - there wouldn't be pollution or pirates yet. Pirates sort of require there to be an agreed system of laws, which there isn't necessarily - each tirbe has their own rules and the Gathering of Clans has some basic ones to ensure the peace, but there aren't any laws that would force people to take the name of pirates, so to speak. Of course, there are people running around causing trouble on the high seas, but their boats would be be extremely basic and there wouldn't be pollution, and they'd just be considered troublemakers rather then pirates. Basically if you're not on clan territory, there's techniquely no laws dictating what you can and can't do. If you do something terrible to a clan member, though, and it becomes known, then that will have it's own consequences.

Also, there would totally be people wanting to eat the hearts of mermaids to live forever!They just wouldn't be dubbed pirates. I do imagine there is probably an island clan somewhere who sends their little boats out into the ocean and causing trouble, I just don't think they'd be defined as pirates, as that denotes a later time period. So maybe there is a clan across the ocean that is obsessed with eating the hearts of mermaids and mermans?

And I really love his creative motivation to join the Dark Gods :D That'll have some effects on the oceans in the world for sure.
Also just wondering if Prey Hypersensitivity would be called that if he's a mermaid now? You could probably just remove the "prey" parts and keep it called hypersensitivity. If he's having to look out for all his mermaid children, then he'd be like an observant parent looking out for trouble, it's sweet <3

Ok so - Marina's shell has three functions:
+ Playback conversations
+ Eavesdrop
+ Confusion and Misdirecting enemies

I'd say the top two is fine, but if you want three it'd be a more powerful ability if it's a guarenteed part of the ability.
For example - you can still use the conch to make the sounds of the oceans, or to record conversations. You could use that to distract people (e.g. recording a conversation from their superior so they go somewhere else) but whether they fall for it would be a roll. However if you're saying that it's a part of the ability, then that's not potency 1, since it fills three functions, one of which can be applied combatitively.

In comparison, Raydon's potency one can mark something to be aware of things around it, vaguely.
Khyrian's potency 1 makes a person hate another, making them more likely to divulge information.
So that's the sort of level of power potency 1 reaches.

Weakest Potency 2 - Water Manipulation. It really depends on how much you can manipulate water whether this belongs here. The way this is worded right now, this could cover anything from forming water droplets to causing tidal waves, to sucking all the water out of someone's body, instantly killing them. So you'll really need to specify on what this power actually does before I can comment on whether it is appropriate in this slot.

Also, this doesn't entirely make sense with the necklace - How did your mortal self acquire it? Why would this link to his God ability? Mortals and Immortals aren't really linked apart from their souls.

For example, Miosura is a goddess who is assosciated with autumn and spring. her level 2 potency ability is she can summon sweet smelling flowers when she walks that soothe feelings and blossom contentedness in the hearts of man.

Weakest Potency 3 - This is fine :D Since this is a weak ability, it'd be fairly easy to break them out of it (e.g. if they were in danger, through the right conversation) so just a heads up there.

Moderate Potency 1 - This could also be quite powerful for this ability slot, as you could reappear anywhere. It also negates any possible damage to you, and I'm wondering how this would act if you were already wounded (for example if you were bleeding before you do this, do you go into statis?) also how much awareness do you have in this form?

Moderate Potency 2 - Awesome concept! Since you're a Dark God I'll leave this as is, if you were a normal god it'd need some adjustments. However, when used on Player Characters, I'll be using dice to determine how long the effect lasts, with some modifiers for Lifeforce amounts of both players.

Potency 3 - Ok, the way we'll run this is it'll have a based cost. PM or talk to me OOC or in discord when you're using it, and we'll adjust the cost accordingly. Again, you're a dark god so :D

I'm happy with your strongest ability slot :D
Right, so:
+ Need to add in a bio and adjust some things
+ Need to add descriptions to your ability sections
+ Probably remove the magic water necklace, sorry!
+ Need to name your Clan and add some description about it. From Discord chat you're making a coastal Clan? So it'll probably be along the west coast. Down south is more marshland area, so just keep that in mind when thinking of where you'd like to place it, north mid or south (or anything variably in between xD)

As I said in Discord, you've been actively involved in the community recently, and I've seen your dedication to getting your character up. For that reason I'll let you start the RRA if you'd like, but of course you can do this traditionally if it's easier. Just wanted to give you the option if you wanted it.

Right so @sakurasan and @Blueflame I've sent you both PM's, but the conversations haven't been moving along. I am happy to help but you need to talk to me about stuff ^^ As it is, I know it's alot to expect you both to make characters today, if you're still interested - so for now I will be rerolling any characters involved with yours, and if you do decide to make a character later, you can still do so ^^

@mae Can you explain to me something pleeeeaasse ? How do I do that Relationship Table thing ? I totally didn't understood what to do...unfortunately :(

You mean the sheet? All you need to do is find the relationships you rolled (which should be on the CS page in the header post) and sort through them, writing up a description for them to the best of your ability. This may involve discussing with other players how the relationship started. Essentially, you can delete the profiles of all the people that you don't know from the main relationship section, and you can delete all the people you do know from the strangers section.

After, this just becomes a place to document the information your character gains about other characters.

Did that clarify things?

@Ashevelendar @RedXCross

^ What Red said. And if you're still confused, you can check our relation sheets for reference. RedXCross, Inertia, and Sarcelle are done with theirs. I'm almost done. You can check ours for reference:)

@RedXCross Yes it did. Thanks. It was all mumbo-jumbo in my head when I posted. I think I've got it now. Really. Thanks !

@WritePersephone's Love relation has been rerolled to Alexis Hunter.
@InertiaKanza's Friend relation has been rerolled to Kenzie Moraitis.
@MeloNarcissa's Enemy relation has been rerolled to Floran Cestanz. (I believe you said you count your characters for roles other then Love, but let me know)

@MeloNarcissa's Love relation has been rerolled to Eclair.
@Framing A MooseStalana's Love relation has been rerolled to Kenzie Moraitis.
@DusksongKenzie Moraitis' Friend relation has been rerolled to Ophelia.
@RedXCrossNumas Inora's crush has been rerolled to Bahji.
Ophelia's aquaintance has been rerolled to Valerie.

@Ashevelendar@Black Panther@Filthy Mudblood

@Write Well...your Persephone character is Alexis's target. Just so you know. She's sent to capture you and will fall for your character.

@Mae
Sorry for being a pain, but which love relation needed to be rerolled? Because Stalana had two.

I believe @Dusksong doesn't want any Love for Kenzie.

@Framing A Moose Blueflame's CS

@Ashevelendar

Sounds fun! I'm fine with that don't worry.

@Write Persephone has rolled Friend for Xena.

@Dusksong

@Framing A Moose Your character is loved by all then. Monogamy is so over-rated , yes ? xD

@Write Thanks ! Will write that in the Relationship Sheet :)

@write Sorry for the double post. Made a mistake. Persephone has a crush on her.

Éclair will be her target. Sorry.

@Ashevelendar

Let me make it clear, because it was my bad mostly. Éclair has a new love of Narcissa. Making her only love Narcissa. Persephone has Narcissa and Alexis. Thusly according to your fields, Alexis would hunt her (Persephone). Is that good with you?