Hey there guys. Let's see what we have here.

[@Ayemdar] Everything is good to go. Anna is now accepted.

[quote=@Vongola_Hasayo][@Scio] Would the hatsudo class include summoning familiars?[/quote]That would be correct.

[quote=@Apollosarcher]
[@Scio] I was thinking of a musician character that either summons and controls a companion through music or he himself changes but only for the duration of the song.

Thoughts?
[/quote]I see no problem with that; we just have to discuss the details of that concept.

[@RumikoOhara]Everything seems fine up until the abilities. You don't need to state that she's an "extreme" Igyo-type. I don't mind all the physical enhancements she has, but I don't like the whole quantification thing and specifics regarding her abilities. Everyone's supposed to start out as beginners and are relatively weak. Hearing sounds either too faint or outside of normal human ranges and being almost impossible to sneak up on or surprise seem too much. Enhanced hearing would suffice. Same thing goes for her vision; just mention that she has cat-like vision or enhanced vision. As for those tail quirks, I don't mind their habit of entwining. As for her so-called counter balance, you could just say she's acrobatic or agile which would already encompass better finnese and overall movement. Lastly, the whole "35 mph for about 100 yards", "combat speed where she moves twice as fast as the fastest human", and the bit regarding her resting and charging period. That's too much; at best, she's an above average athlete when it comes to those physical feats. And quantifying with time doesn't translate well in text-based RPs. Those things are for me to decide and usually woulbe post-based instead of "time". Remember, she's just 15 years old. Keep things simple, man. Everyone will get stronger, no need to rush. Sorry for being strict, even I don't like doing it.

[@Mercurial] Simplicity is beauty and Enver is one of the best exampes of that. If you think of it, almost all types of abilities have been used and are technically unoriginal. You make a character unique based on how they act. I'm expecting good things from this man. Accepted!

[@Masaki Haruna] Still don't know what her martial art is about aside from having a fox motif. Also, could you remove that tidbit about my comment about kitsune magic. That's really not needed. Thanks, man. Anyway, accepted.

[@Sodium] I don't see anything wrong with Arthur. I just have one question, aside form summoning a sword, is there anything special or notable about it?

[@KOgaming] I like her; just remove that part about lifting whole cars. She'll get to that point, but not at the start. Also, you mentioned that she has ursine physiology, so I thought that she was an Igyo-type, but you mentioned in her skills something about being able to shut off her powers, which points to a Henkei-type. What is really is her ability? And what specifically is altered in her form?