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[@NekoMizu] It's looking good so far! Removing some of the commentary from it would help me greatly, however. ^^;

Although some of the commentary is honest such as the origins of your characters' inspirations, that kind of confused me when I first looked at it. Removing some of that commentary would make it cleaner! See my feedback to Keyenpeydee's character sheet in Page 3 to know what I'm referring to, as it's similar to what he had to fix initially.

Also, the identical names made me brainfart. Maybe you could change one of their names...? I'm intending on doing a special aesthetic for the Character Tab List but it might confuse other RPers if their names are the same. x-x

Looking good though. Sibling powah. o-o;
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Oh wow. I actually forgot the name change for the sister. Though her actual name might be a bit similar too. It's Mizu Koneko instead of Neko. I just forgot to do that part for some reason.