[@Banana] Ok, I've read the sheet in full, and my primary issue is that it's a little sparse (pun definitely intended), but I think that just comes with the territory of this being a rough draft. Basically I'd like most everything to be expanded on and in greater detail. The fact that this is essentially two characters in one means that detail and length are especially important as you'll need to fully detail both the twins. The places that are most lacking in more detail I'd say are appearance and skills. The two individuals need to have a fully fleshed out skill base for each one, after all. As of now they are both only good at a single thing (and "police officer" isn't a skill either, it's a profession which involves a myriad of different skill sets, so that in particular needs far more detail).

But like I said, all this is no doubt just a symptom of being a prototype rough draft. I look forward to seeing the final copy, as it is definitely an interesting idea.