[@NecroKnight], it's a good character overall. However, you could add more things into the Physical Description and the Background. For description, you could talk about what she usually wears daily and how she does her hair. As for the background, how did she get to Baltham and Bainbridge Island? I'd also like if she got a medical discharge for losing her arm, leg, or whatever you want it to be. It doesn't even have to be a medical discharge. Just like what Valor, your character seems unapproachable to others. 

Your character could have been military before they get the discharge.