[@NecroKnight], I already told you what you needed to add for the background. How did she get to Baltham and Bainbridge Island? And if you are still going to the military thing, what they did during the military. I'd rather you be civilian so more people can interact with you and you lose interest because no-one is interacting with you. But if you refuse to give up on having your character in the military, then go ahead and have them in the military. It has to make sense why they joined the military.