[@LegionPothIX] Welcome!

It looks mostly good but there are a few points I would like to change...

As you are clearly familiar with d&d I will say we are using AD&D 2nd Ed as the base with many many home brewed things thrown in to form it into its own story driven adventure.    

1.) You have many skills that are not listed but according to your story related comments you possess and we are keeping close track of what people can do and what they try to do. As we progress we are watching what skills you develop to give you proficiencies in those things.  At this point in the game you can add another 3 class skills and 2 life skills to your list to bring you in skill level along with the other players.  I would suggest whatever weapon you prefer (or barehand fighting type) to be at least one of your class skills.  Also it's a free skill but I need to know what language you speak.       

2.)  If you are actually supposed to be a sorcerer your rogue skills will move to non-class skills (for now its fine considering your background) as you focus on your magical talents.  You may find yourself leaning more towards roguishness too which would reverse this so at the moment I'd like to leave it vague as to what class you actually are developing (what you want to be when you grow up remains the same, kids always have dreams)...You have your character built in such a way that she might find herself evolving as the adventure progresses.  I'd like to leave your class type listed as an "OR" until she gets a firmer grasp on herself.  

3.) hide/move silently is indeed stealth...please pick a terrain.  Stealth: urban for example.  

4.)  count those two points in your life skill section as "appraise" and "knowledge: underworld"...underworld knowledge would be something you would naturally have and cover a lot of the basics of keeping out of trouble (both with crime bosses and the law) that you would likely know. 



Further things are story/history based and may be secret among other things: I will be sending you a PM as soon as I can to discuss these and some magic junk.