[@Halvtand]
I'm fully aware that I'm giving you a lot to look over, but I've got one other set of propositions to make. Just a couple of ideas or suggestions I had. Both of them involve the posting order we go with once we have enough party members (I don't know how many you were aiming for) to begin the story.

Here's my two thoughts;

Firstly, I want to recommend that, if the number of people we have allows it, that [@Ailyn Evensen] and myself aren't placed as the follow-up poster for each other. Though we would likely be able to get out posts faster if we worked in sync like that, I think it could potentially be a little harder for us to be unbiased with each other than other people in this role-play, and it could compromise the integrity of how you want this game to flow. Ailyn will probably have a more difficult time writing failures for other players' characters than I will in general, but having to do it for me might cause bigger problems. I don't want to seem invincible because my back-up poster is essentially rooting for me, especially since I'm already playing a very powerful archetype.

Secondly, just for the sake of keeping a decent level of activity, I recommend that at the end of each person's post, they use the [@Mention] feature in an "OOC" method (brackets at the bottom, separating it with a line, whatever) so that the person whose actually up next always has a way of being informed it's their turn. I don't know if it's a staple to have a posting order on this site, but it actually is on all of the forums and RPs I've taken part in before, and none of those really had a feature like this, so it could be useful.