[quote=@Skinner35] [img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/d0/05/a3/d005a31bba6965fe32b5b01a27ba4d82.jpg[/img] [b]Name[/b]: Scyler Skinner. [b]Age[/b]: 25 (looks 30) [b]Description[/b]: Tall, Dark hair, Blue eyes, Burn mark on left shoulder, Cybernetic right arm. [b]Gender[/b]: Male. [b]Personality[/b]: Optimistic, Tries to be funny, Nice. [b]Backstory[/b]: Been stuck in the war his whole life. Trying to go north to find stable work and freedom. All he needs now is a group to help him get out of here. [b]Skills[/b]: Sharpshooter, Fairly stealthy when needed, Fast, Persuasive, Protective. [b]Extra[/b]: He has a revolver and a teddy bear that he's very protective of. [/quote] Context error: fantasy, not sci-fi. Cybernetic does not exist. I apologize for any lack of clarity that caused it, though I could have sworn I mentioned it somewhere. Revolvers are a very rare thing and go well with the cybernetic arm in being generally out of place. There's a technology gap between parts of the world, but not a 500 real-world year's worth. Combined with the above, a little more info on the backstory would be nice. It doesn't have to be long, but perhaps have a little more meat. And it would have been nice to have posted in the OOC first, waited for a response and then posted in the Char section - Char is for accepted chars, not ones pending, and in this case it is alas not accepted as it stands.