[quote=@Zarkun] Alright, first problem is the guy's age, which is easily rectified by simply adding how old he was when he left his home. Because, well, he's far too young for all of Earthland to know him either way. Another issue is the World's Symbol of Peace and Justice. That's, uh, well, not feasible. At 24, even if he left at 16, he wouldn't have traveled to enough of the world to have earned the title. Not to mention that he's usurping the title from each kingdom's respective ruler, not that there's a huge issue with that, just food for though. The other issue is calling his White Dragon Blade of War. And also the White Dragon, but we'll get to that. The issue with the blade is calling it a twist on maker magic. Simply put, Dragon Slayer attacks, well, some of them anyways, will take on the form of weapons. That doesn't make it a twist on Maker magic, that's just how the spell is. And now on to the final issue, the choice of White Dragon. That is Sting's Dragon Slayer magic in the anime/manga Canon. And, uh, we aren't allowing replicant magics from the Dragon Slayers in the show. Pick a different Dragon and you're golden for me, and fix the other things I said. However, you will still need and OK from [@Expolar] and [@Caits]. [/quote] 1. The nickname is simply that, a nickname. He's iconic as it helps stave off more evil. To make them think twice. He is just known. He hasn't traveled the entire world but it's a moniker. Not even started by him. Regardless I can just go back to the Light of Justice due to the good he does. 2. Its not Sting's magic. Its a variation of light magic sure but its meant to be a holy version. If so then I'll just make him a Light Mage cause this took a moment and everything is kinda were I need it to be or just go back to sword magic.