[@MelonHead]

 It looked fairly decent to me. I would have liked to see a little more interaction but I can't really comment on that because all I did was try to put everyone in the same areas without much interaction myself. But hell, even if I have to make a backstroke that's fine too as long as its in the same round. This is why I use the same separators as the GM. So if a conversation carries on while in the encampment I can merely throw the header up as a second post in this round put my two cents in without interrupting the real flow of events as time carries on. But that's just my thought.