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Criticizing another person for their style is a crap thing to do.
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http://www.gutenberg.org/files/37134/37134-h/37134-h.htm This is generally a good guidebook. There are some concrete rules that will determine whether or not your writing "reads" well and some of them by not following you won't make any sense (namely, concrete vs abstract definitions, you don't want readers to have to riddle out what your sentence meant when describing something). This is in the same way that while you could draw a human being in any way possible, it's not [i]truly[/i] any way possible because then you'd just have a blob or someone who does not appear to be human.

I love the "15. Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form." part.